The manipulation was, eh, interesting, very grabby however, which I dislike.
In fact, you were grabbing during every dismember excluding the pec I could see in that replay.
Transition to the pose was nice, as was the pose itself.
Too long of a pause between the pec dismember and the final two dms for me to call it a madman, however.
Overall though, not bad, room for improvement, but not bad at all.