Toribash
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the ultimate non-boring thread
hey people out there.
here are some of my latest replays and one i already posted in a different thread. id like to hear what u think. really.

thanks & a nice day
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#afterdark.rpl (181.1 KB, 18 views)
Name of the first replay had me expecting you to pull a noweb, but the actual replay was good too.
First two hits were great, nice and clean, however I disliked the way you went about attacking his leg, it ended up smacking you in the face, which looks alittle sloppy.
Still was a nice replay, I would just end it after the first two hits.

Second replay, the core was very hot. But then, wait, it looked powerful as hell, how did it only get one dismember? In fact, the decap looks like it could have boomed as well. Anyway, it looked great, I dislike that you had to grab for the decap, but its still a good replay.

Third one, it had pretty powerful hits, but it was so slow.
Also, the skeet was really nice, but I was really hoping you would have done a skeetcap, just because you left the head attached to the neck still.
Also a good replay, but probably my least favorite of this batch.

Fourth one, I loved the core, as well as the decap.
Not really much else to say about it, it was alittle slow, but you made up for it with power, at least in my own opinion.

The last one was probably my favorite of the batch, the decap kicked so much ass, and the core was pretty nice as well.
You had the arm in your grab for a moment after the core, and it would have been cool if you could have knocked that bit of meat off of it before the pose, but that does not take away from the replay, it was still very nice.

Overall, try to combine the speed you used in the second one with the hits you got in the third one.

Very nice replays, I had alot of fun watching them.
oh yeah
thanks alot for your reply and the detailed analysis bishop.
im trying to edit some of those, especially the second one.
for now i made another version of the first, i changed the last kick. didnt care for the pose yet. what do u say?
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#editedthingy.rpl (190.6 KB, 13 views)
Wow, these are really nice imo. Although i disagree with bishop about the 3rd replay, i think it was one of the best i like the fluidness especially. Probably my second favorite to the last one. Keep it up.
Last edited by Revenge360; Jun 4, 2010 at 03:04 PM. Reason: spelling mistake :P
Two words... BEAT... DOWN...
The beginning was a bit too stiff, and I was not impressed by the unrealistic grab. the split was a bit awkward, but the boom hit was nice. But the replay had too much grabs, try using velocity more instead of pure force.
overall 7/10