Originally Posted by
Krzysiu397
Remember that sigs are 450x100 or lower
I dont got the point why you mirrored it
I see your trying a vector style
3/10
Try make it better
That's a load of rubbish. Sigs can be whatever size you want, it's just that on this particular site there is a height restriction.
Anyways. It's a really simple tag that is lacking in a few of the basics.
Two focal points ruins sigs. There's no place that you can call a focal point due to it being exactly the same. It makes my eyes drift around which isn't a good thing. The fact that the focals are featureless doesn't help the situation either as it makes them look flat and uninteresting.
There has been no effort to create depth. The focals lack features which makes them look flat and doesn't allow them to come out of the signature in a way that looks 3D.
There is a lack of effects and the colours are boring and kind of monotone. Learn about C4D placement, pen tool, smudging, fractals, lighting, flow, depth and other effects. There are thousands of tutorials on the web that should teach you these things.