What do you think?

Depends. Did you make the drawings yourself?

Nope.

But I made the text,the effects,the stroke and the GIF effects.

These are simple signs, I'm learning how to make GIF effects.

I'd have to say the text doesn't really fit in with the render.
Try to make it flow, even blend, in more.

I think you'll understand what I mean after you've searched around/practiced a bit.
Keep trying, you'll get there. :B