just tell me what i can improve not what is bad and if you like it or not.

u took a screeny right?

hmm it seems that u used some filters and uhm is that a third hand floating under his chest?
the random colors round his leds somehow annoy me

the written HAMPA is veeeeeeery basic, gah
pose is .. ok

4/10

well i geuss u arnt very exsperience in art because i used no filters just smudg , lighting and brush tools

ty for ur coments.

I Suggest You to try it again with hampa's new customs....
simply type /dl hampa ............ and wait until it's finished

I don't like the color changes from his chest to his hip/glute area. Your smudging and lighting/shading needs a little bit of cleaning up. Make the fire or whatever more smooth as well, especially on the abs. Definitely needs a background and better text.

D0R was right in saying it just looks like you put it through a filter or two then edited.. It really does. Overall I'll give it a 5/10.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
well i guess you're very new and d0r will forgive you for your lack of exposure to toribash art...

im just seeing a bit of contrast changing combined with filters and a bit of random brushing and erasing.
no enhancement or refinement to it.
it would help if we knew what exactly it was that you were aiming to do with the edit. its not doing much for me atm...

he said he did use any filters but meh it looks ok 6.8/10

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