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Semi's Not Completely Bad Replays
For the summer I decided to work on SP a lot. This first replay is not a finished product. However, I would still appreciate feedback, criticism and ideas.
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Wow semiclean that's an awesome idea you have there, I like the beginning kick you did. Im not sure about the kick you did to push him, i think it may have affected the speed but I have no right to give criticism.
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Loved the 1st kick but the manipulation was a bit crappy.

Try and get more power like the 1st one on each part.
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Originally Posted by stickman5 View Post
Wow semiclean that's an awesome idea you have there, I like the beginning kick you did. Im not sure about the kick you did to push him, i think it may have affected the speed but I have no right to give criticism.

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Loved the 1st kick but the manipulation was a bit crappy.

Try and get more power like the 1st one on each part.

Thanks for the feedback, the manip was just a bit of a filler I may edit it out later. At the same time the kicks are kind of hard to add power to but I'll work on it.
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Ideally the replay should be smooth from start to finish. notnoob was correct to highlight the 'less than perfect' manipulation. You could try retracting the kick after the break to setup the next move. Personally i would switch legs after the first kick and attempt a back heel of some kind, but thats just me ;]

Overall very promising.
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I didn't feel like working on my move (I'll get to it later) so to past the time I did something else so that could practice walking, give me a few days and I will get the other one posted.
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I like the first one better. Stop dancing around and keep killing him. And find a good ending pose in there somewhere.
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Originally Posted by Bloobing View Post
I like the first one better. Stop dancing around and keep killing him. And find a good ending pose in there somewhere.

I working on it, this is harder than i thought after that first kick, I get stumped, i'm not sure what to do.

Here's another version of the replay, in this one I added an actual decap, by that i mean I actually hit him.

Merged. Please wait 24 hours before bumping your thread, thanks. ~Tamer0
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I think its pretty good you need more speed it doesnt really look
like those hits should of broke him and the boom looked very
weak but it was still good 6.5/10
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Try extending the left hip at the frame before the impact. You might be able to work with it then.

Edit: Something like this, perhaps?

Also, if you don't grab at frame 359, you get a decap. I just figured a backkick would look nicer.
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