C&C plz.

origional:

I don't really know what style your going for but I'll try and CC anyways.

Bits of it are a little pixelated, and on the right side of the neck you left a white gap.

Other than that it looks pretty good.

8/10

Sup 9 posts and 298 views.

It looks nice, but your cropping (might be because you wanted the background transparent) is pretty sketchy.

The 'shadows' around the neck look a little unrealistic, but it's nice.

6/10 colors is kinda wierd

Its pretty nice i love the hair, yet the grey shadows ruin it with vecotrs to ccreate shade its easietr just to you a darker version of your base colour. other than than that some elements seem a little pointy. Nice nonetheless.

I like the hair, I think the grey shadows ruin it.
Make the shadows larger, more abstract(still resembling real shadows) shapes.

And the background is an eyesore to me. If you're not willing to put a good 10 minutes in to a bg, just don't do one or make something simplistically good looking.

okay thank you, i kinda need help at backgrounds, im not really good at it as you can see, this is my practice.
thank you.

edit: my origiuonal drawing

lol nice, but it's missing something.
8/10

The original drawing is pretty good, so is the one you did one PC
I dont particularly like those lines, on the FAILXD banner
She is a bit shiny xD

MY RATING 9/10

i like it ^_^ could have been a bit more organic but still a very nice job considering you amde the entire thing yourself (original image+vector) 9/10