I want to make a head based on the plague doctors in the medieval times.

http://i396.photobucket.com/albums/p...ueDocter-2.png
http://i396.photobucket.com/albums/p...ueDocter-3.png
http://i396.photobucket.com/albums/p...ueDocter-4.png
http://i396.photobucket.com/albums/p...DoctorEdit.png

This failed. I'm not making a head texture, just a person now.




C&C is a must for me to finish, I'm running out of ideas. Please tell me:
What you like about it
What you dislike about it
What I should improve on
Wwhat you would like to see.

Arrgh, reminds me of the York Dungeon, makes me sick.
Looks good, make the nose big though.

That is NOT going to map as a head. It just won't. The nose will almost go to a point where you can't see the tip. And the edges of the eyes will be where the ears are :P The glass is pretty foggy, and the nose is more of a sausage >_> more detail get

But maybe if I raise the head texture, and make the canvas bigger but keep the face the same size, it might fit.

Nope, the eyes are too far apart, it shouldnt be yellow, should be black..

The eyes should be black?

I think it should be more black and white not yellow and the nose is a lot bigger i think in real life.. can you please post spinny?

Use these as refrences...

The spinny is horrible on both versions. I decided it's not going to be a head texture because of my horrible proportions and mapping skills >.<

its not that bad .. your still a really good artist. keep trying and soon i think you will get it. your close.

Looks like Eggman from Sonic. v


So,
It's not bad, need more shadow.