Pretty nice, I loved the manipulation (As I normally do), as well as that sneaky skeetcap.
Main thing I disliked about this one was the flow of everything up to the split punch, its alittle hard to explain, but your motions almost felt that they had a pattern of speeding up and then stopping, and that made it look alittle twitchy.
The crotch boom flowed in pretty nicely, can't say anything I dislike about it from here on, nice.