i'm no pro when it comes to toribash and this is the 1st time i've ever tried starting in relaxed all. i just need some feedback on my acrobatics with the relaxed all

*Note: I'm looking for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism not flaming insults >.>

Alright, You should have done more flips and less going from hands-legs to the end

hm,well i don't fully understand all the movements yet tbh. was just doin what i had to do to keep from DQ'n* xD

double post anyways heres my 2nd attempt