Originally Posted by
Praeter
Text is placed badly and hard to read. You might try to use the rule of thirds for focal placement. BG is quite nice, render might blend a bit too well on the right side. kinda lacks flow, but it might get better if you change the text.
Originally Posted by
Praeter
Light is distracting as you already mentioned. Together with the long head it looks horrible. BG is meh, chin stands out too much imo. Color sheme is nicely chosen.
Originally Posted by
Praeter
I don't know how much you did and how much the stock itself is contributing, but in fact, it looks quite nice.
Could use some text or probably something else in the BG, but I like it already.