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[Gfx]Abstract - Paradox
Snowed in, can't leave my house..
So why not make something random?

Illustrator + Photoshop.
Feel free to give some CnC :B



1600x1200 Wallpaper: http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/...mg/4691126.png

Older version 2: http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/...mg/4687370.png
Older version: http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/...mg/4687096.png

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Last edited by AlphasoniK; Dec 16, 2010 at 04:25 PM.
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I'm an artist.
Awesome Tim I like the way you made the background too. It looks like an old painting made of Leonardo da Vinci. He made killer weapons you know.
I was also thinking about something else.... Uhm... I kinda applied for Fr3styL a month or 2 ago, and.. I was wondering if you would accept me :3
Last edited by NinjaBent; Dec 14, 2010 at 07:37 PM.
Critiquing abstract is hard because you can't really comment on proportions or style or much really...
But I will try. I get the sense of a Davinci's prototype design, what with that aged parchment (which is pulled off beautifully)
And the text which I assume was not designed to be read, but it leaves me curious of what is said in the top left, but it's too small :[
But the main point, Is what is the point of this image, what did you intend the viewer to receive from this piece, my focus was drawn to the dark centre of the image at first, and then quickly to the lighter parts trying to make sense of the math and English.

As an image 9/10 the parchment design is pulled of quite well
As a piece of Artwork 3/10 I did not feel emotion at all looking at this pics of work. But maybe I'm too logical and cannot see some subtle message.
I type as I speak, with several commas and run on sentences, dont be hatin'.
good depth in the random shape
needs a hand made coffee stain on the top right corner
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I love the background, except the random waterdroplets.

I agree with Orion, the inner design feels too large.

The great thing about Da Vinci's work is that its very personal, with the small notes and text. If you made the design maybe 60% of its size and added some other small illustrations it would greatly increase the piece's appeal.
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I'll tell u one thing: Its great as a wallpaper!. Using it right now (with some editing) on my second computer. Together with Serious Samurize 1.6.3 and widgets it looks fantastic. Thx.
Just don't bust my balls over copyright issues. :]
Yeah I was thinking about making it 1440x900, I'll do that and post the results here.

BenD: I don't have a scanner so I can't make my own brushes ):
Bojan: Go ahead ^^
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1600x1200 Wallpaper: http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/...mg/4691126.png
Last edited by AlphasoniK; Dec 15, 2010 at 05:02 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
I'm an artist.