I love the background, very interesting

The inner design feels too large. In adition it is not overly interesting.
The problem with the composition is that the eye is drawn off the piece, down to the lower right. THis is not so good.

The great thing about Da Vinci's work is that its very personal, with the small notes and text. If you made the design maybe 60% of its size and added some other small illustrations it would greatly increase the piece's appeal.


I think you are developing a great way to make this kind of art, but your 'abstract' designs are letting you down.

I wanted this one to look like an industrial poster in Japan ^^
I agree on the diagonal lines btw, I thought they were needed but they aren't.
Perhaps I'll lower the opacity a bit or erase some stuff or simply delete them.

I'll make this into a 1600x1200 soon, gives me more space so the abstract isn't that large.

Thanks for you comment Gorman.

You must tell me how to make that dirty background! Is it some kind of brush? I need it for my zombie apocalypse comic.

Bojan, PM me your Msn and I'll explain everything.