Okey, my oppinion, this isnt my style of music or video overall, i dont say you cant dance, but shit, variation please? ur doin the same moves over n over, i can also add that u are all amatures, first of all, simple moves wich is poorly executed, i aint sayin i would do better, but with no doubts seen better.
Else.. pretty neat.
ps, get over the jerking shit, i was embarrassed sein that shit.