This was how it began.

What happened after I applied the advice of BenDover and Lwafflez, Who both helped me very much so on this head.

Tell me what you think should be added, changed, and what you think it's worth. Also, I may recolor, and If I do, what should be the color? Please give C&C, Thanks.

P.S. I will post the flat, just as soon as I water mark it.

Looks a lot better now.
That top area was getting on my nerves on the first one. Good job on cleaning that up.
IMO it needs more on the back. Something nice and curvy to help the flow. It needs more curves.
Above average for most other tribal heads I see posted now.

Good luck on your future textures.

It looks great so far...It would look better with a kind of ironman mouth...Overall 9/10 and would sell for 2K

love the second, great job, be more creative and you will be Artist
and about the first, i dont like the mouth(i think is a mouth) but you doing great job!

Yeah, the first one was the original, and then BenDover and LWafflez gave me some suggestions, and those are implemented in the second one.