Here are my replays comment. Sooner or later I will go for ormo.

The opener aint anything great.
The first kick isnt bad and the 2nd one is a tad better.
You were stiffy in the end and you didnt do a pose. Why so lazy :[

7.5/10

The opener was horribly boring and common.
the first kick was very slow and should of been more destructive
the second kick was also very slow and dull.

relaxxxxx all it can do is help, also you need to use more than just 5 of your joints at one time, the best replay makers use the majority of them every turnframe.
5/10 keep trying and you'll get it

New replay.

Too slow.

Woulda liked 3 kicks. :[

Try to aim for the knees.

I like it overall but it was slow, eventhough you tryed to pick up momentum in the first kick.

I think you should use less joints.

Take Tengoman for example.


ANYWAYS ANYWAYS ANWAYS................................

6.2/10

Kind of surpizes me that one person says for me to use more joints and you say to use less. I am so confused.

I'm just saying, from past experiences, that if you move more joints at once ,The right way, you get better speed and momentum, making it easier to dm/boom.

When ur aiming for a boom, or just a single dm, u should use as much joint as you can for making more speed, or just for aiming better.
But when you make the opener, or other movements, u should just use around 5-6 joints to make the opener fluid, if you use every joint,it makes your movements looking stiff, or twitchy.

It was kinda dry it didn't look very good,
you looked novice the replays were slow and you done moves everyone does like
that heli kick you popped in to dm the guy it's not very good I think you need to higher
the standard.