Here is a try at demon. Tell me what you think, use C&C if you would. What is it worth, what could be better, etc. This is not c/p, By the way.

i dont see any metal "effect" looks like hair to me

Add tribal art or teeth

Yeah, It looked a lot more metallic in the preview stages. And I don't think I'm changing the face, I like it how it is at the moment.

Just like 1543 said, it looks more like hair than metal.....
Try making the face lighter.

I think it would look better if you don't mirror it, try to draw two different eyes.

It isn't metal, but it looks like demon. I think it would look better if you change shape of eyes >;OOO

Alright, I see that the biggest thing that you guys want me to change is the eyes. What shape should I use, in your opinions? Also, try giving a bit more info than "the eyes should be different." Nothing wrong with this criticism, but I'd like a bit more, such as ratings, pricing, etc.