Hello.

I made a n00b sorceress. This is a work in progress, so please don't expect it to be awesome and shit.



Edit: Oh yeah, the other arm is holding the staff. Hawke's pose inspired me (Dragon Age II).

You don't want to hear what is wrong and what is right, but u need criticism how to improve? Now u made my brain to stall. How can I tell you what to improve and not to tell u about mistakes?
Ok, what about this, I'll close my one eye and with another I will just look at staff (since it's the only thing that don't bother me, much):

- Pointy shoes could be regular boots, more sexier
- At least show lower part of face, lips, maybe smile
- Top should be with some jewelery, maybe some necklace with runes

I was going to add jewelry +I blacked out the face because I'm still experimenting with it, all the eraser marks got me confused so I have to draw it out on a separate sheet of paper :/.

I'll just remove that part so that people don't get confused (;.