1st attempt:



2nd attempt, text effects suggested by ishi, executed by me:



The original pic I used:


Rate it + criticism

Pretty nice, but I think Lucent is going to stick with the banner we have now.

I personally like the first one better.

8/10

very nice
i like the 2nd more
still good job 8/10!

I like the first one better.
Didn't know you were good at art dad.

The cup itself looks like chocolate.

You should have drawn it yourself instead of using a pic and only adding a word.

You could've made it look like the word [Coffee] was steam. You should've tilted it more, so it looks nearly vertical, instead of horizontal. It looks like a skinny snake ate a fat mouse.

Eh, 7/10.

You didn't do much and the text is horrible. You should make the text yourself and make it either clear or turn it into shaped smoke. For now it looks just out of place and crap.

PS. You'd have to be high to accept creative suggestions from Ishi...

first itДs better
we can see better than 2nd
8/10