Toribash
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O: ~Star's replay thread~ :O
Some of my more recent replays. Will be uploading more as i make them. I usually make 1 or 2 a week. Trying to get more into the momentum side of things. If anyone has any tips you are welcome to post them.
Note: Crushed Dreams is just a wip. The pec dm wont be in there when i finish it.
Would appreciate your CnC
thanks :P
Attached Files
#Star - Dizzy2.rpl (192.4 KB, 41 views)
#Star - Colliding forces1.rpl (256.6 KB, 25 views)
#Star - Crushed dreams.rpl (95.9 KB, 26 views)
Last edited by Star; Mar 16, 2011 at 06:45 AM.
i only watched your one for voltage blah blah, but what i can see, it's messy. thats all i can really say, it looks messy... 6/10 cause i know you coulda made that neater.
THIS WAS ORIGINALLY THE WORST SIGNATURE EVER, FOR YOUR SAKE IT WAS FIXED. ~ Vox
i love ur third one
nice kicks with the head and nice position calculation
and the event one is it some weird mod?
y is it leg off when u hit his body?
Originally Posted by boredlolz View Post
i only watched your one for voltage blah blah, but what i can see, it's messy. thats all i can really say, it looks messy... 6/10 cause i know you coulda made that neater.

That replay was for a creativity section. As you can see the title hints at tori failing at hitting uke and dm'ing other parts. Then finally being victorious at the end.


Originally Posted by TheFail
i love ur third one
nice kicks with the head and nice position calculation
and the event one is it some weird mod?
y is it leg off when u hit his body?

ty for the criticism.
And read above about the event replay.
idid get it, i'm just saying that you coulda made it look neater then that still.
THIS WAS ORIGINALLY THE WORST SIGNATURE EVER, FOR YOUR SAKE IT WAS FIXED. ~ Vox
o now i see wat the event replay is about
basically hitting the head triggers other parts to fall off
nice thinking but if the judge dont get the idea, it's hard for u to win
bumpity bump
Moar comments please!
Latest replay, for the opener 27 challenge
Attached Files
#Star - Opener 27.rpl (171.7 KB, 45 views)