Ok so yeah GUISE i have to write a 7 page story for english class. the plot has to be based off of Romeo and Juliet. I had this for an idea of the story.

Title: The Hackers

Story: Its 2035 and a virtual reality fighting game called Network Capabilities has been out for over 10 years, everyone plays it but there seems to be a problem. The game turns out to have a glitch and a mighty one at that. If you play enough of it, and you play in a versus mode, you can be instantly electrocuted and killed without even knowing what happens. To boot, theres going to be a tournament coming up. about 500000 people are going to participate in it. The game has a group of elite hackers, who are holding the tournament. It started as an underground tournament and inflated to the whole world. They are going to be fighting in versus mode, so people are going to be killed if they lose, and they are so into the game, they dont even care. The hackers overclock the game to make it powerful enough to hold the tournament and the government finds out. Apparently with that much overclocking, the game could easily fry every piece of technology on earth causing a worldwide blackout in the case of a very heavy duty fight, which would be catastrophic. The government goes in and tries to stop the game, which inturn causes a giant riot. a girl from the hackers turns out to be in love with someone on the squad thats going in to end the game. They fall in love bla bla bla yeah and secretly go and hang out with each other. (FUCKING BANG EACH OTHERS BRAINS OUT) and the whole thing is decided to ne fought in the game to end the tournament, and the game over all. The guy has to fight the girl hees in love with, and doesnt relize its a fight to the death. him and the girl pretend to fight but dont really, until one person from each side gets back into that fight. The guy from the System 32 team (the team whos shutting the game down) ends up killing the girl the other guys in love with. The guy in short terms rages. and fights all the way to the end to end the game because of what the game did to his beloved girl. And he ends the game, winning. After that, a couple of years, he goes into a deep depression, and ends up killing himself, the same way his other girlfriend died, by being electrocuted. c: Oh joy.

Any things that need to be tweaked?

needs more waffles. Be sure to use the word juxtaposition, teachers love that word.

need halp? i know well the story.. i even been at Verona for see what ppls think is the real house of Juliet.
Actually the 2 families existed for real, but cant be sure about romeo and giulietta

i dont understand nothing of works like that
but to me seems to be pretty nice

the hard part is gonna be making it 7 fucking pages long. >.> LARGE FONT GO

add some shitty dialogue like 'what a nice weather we have' and blah blah blah
1 page more
but seriously i haven't heard about worse task xd

Romeo&Juliet suck... But i had 4 for exam :P Lucky shots... A,B,C :P
I know only that at last main characters died... But i remember too some short fights so... u can write someting like

" Romeo want to hit Parys but he dodge "
" Parys want to hit Romea but he dodge too! "
" And there romeo use super waffle powers and kill paris by decap " blah blah derp = Romeo hacker! He has god >.> ( unbeatable )

well... if you want... i can tell my story. lets say this. romeo and juliet were a coupple in love which couldnt be together. thats whats the story talk about. I am in love with a girl i can not be with now. Romeo and Juliet had as difficulty the family Me and my GF have the distance, the difference between out 2 countries and laws (visa and such). But our Love is strong.
You can also think about write something like: time of war, 2 beloved which live in the 2 nations in war, they see each other secretly, until they get cought, they run away for escape with the soldiers behind get trapped on a bridge... and then they jump together from that bridge. something like this... i just gave some base. hope it may halp you to get inspiration
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well... if you want... i can tell my story. lets say this. romeo and juliet were a coupple in love which couldnt be together. thats whats the story talk about. I am in love with a girl i can not be with now. Romeo and Juliet had as difficulty the family Me and my GF have the distance, the difference between out 2 countries and laws (visa and such). But our Love is strong.
You can also think about write something like: time of war, 2 beloved which live in the 2 nations in war, they see each other secretly, until they get cought, they run away for escape with the soldiers behind get trapped on a bridge... and then they jump together from that bridge. something like this... i just gave some base. hope it may halp you to get inspiration

Include gore, use http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=231958 as an inspiration, profit.

Me and Powas are pros at this shit.