Well, this is my WIP of a texture set entitled Deadly Haze and it's one of my first sets ever.

Please C&C and rate :3.

Nice work, but you need to work more in the shadows. 9/10

You have potential.
Try shading in some more parts.
Try making the yellow shock-thingys a little more transparent considering they're on vents. (By the way, I like the vents, but try using blur on the vents.)
Add some more details as well.
7/10

pretty detailed and cool!
I like the colors... 9.5/10

Okay guys, thank you for the comments, i'll post more pictures as i finish more parts.

its very nice
btw:its based on the haze game?

wow, amazing for a first set. ive made a few texture sets over the past year and i still cant make them that well. you thought of a price for it?

Well, i haven't heard of any game called haze so i guess no.

Hmm,i haven't really thought of a price, i'll just wait for some suggestions xD.

an awesome set for a first timer, i like the details and color choice. cant wait to see the full set 9/10 i like the shading too.

I can't really comment seeming as it's a wip
because you have used the same texture twice, try and make the thighs different from the shins but it's a good start,
nice colours and good effects.