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[VID] Trackmania
First off, I wasn't sure if this belongs into "Art" or "Gaming Chat".
I hope this is the right section.

To the video. This is a WIP. I'm not 100% done with the editing/keyframing,
but I'd like to have some feedback, before I finish it and its messed up.

''The second industrial revolution has yet to be fully experienced by 17% of the world as nearly 1.3 billion people still lack access to electricity.''
First of all, this goes in art.
If you were to make a detailed description of the game and have a thread discussing about it, then it would go into gaming chat.

Now, the video is quite nice. Has a very soothing calm mood to it and I liked the amount of contrast in it, it sort of set the mood. But the text in the intro was a bit too small and felt really plain at that. It's also a very nice game, I used to be seriously good at it a couple of years back, ranked 30something for my country if I can recall correctly. However I don't think the calmness of the video suits the game, since it well, is a fast-paced wall-riding sort of tense racing game. But in a overall, very neatly done.
iam not interesting with the vidieo, but iam interesting with the game, is a cool game
you make me very consentrate to the vidieo, and nice editing
good job
9/10
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I was underwhelmed by the video, and feel more the need to critique your driving than the vid =/

havent played TMN since they brought in the stupid freezone shit...
was a mistake bringing it in, completly killed our local scene. and they keep changing it, my usual servers are gone.
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Originally Posted by affei View Post
Wow that makes me relaxing and feel comfortable.

Nice

I'm glad you didn't say "bored". ;]
Originally Posted by Ostakex View Post
First of all, this goes in art.
If you were to make a detailed description of the game and have a thread discussing about it, then it would go into gaming chat.

Now, the video is quite nice. Has a very soothing calm mood to it and I liked the amount of contrast in it, it sort of set the mood. But the text in the intro was a bit too small and felt really plain at that. It's also a very nice game, I used to be seriously good at it a couple of years back, ranked 30something for my country if I can recall correctly. However I don't think the calmness of the video suits the game, since it well, is a fast-paced wall-riding sort of tense racing game. But in a overall, very neatly done.

Thanks for the comprehensive feedback.
I'll make sure to insert faster music in my next video.
I chose the song because I wanted to experiment a bit with synching video to audio.
Originally Posted by Doxxy View Post
You only require one tag, and wip isn't one. Fixed.

Thx Doxxy.

Originally Posted by Vman45 View Post
iam not interesting with the vidieo, but iam interesting with the game, is a cool game
you make me very consentrate to the vidieo, and nice editing
good job
9/10

At least that's something. ^^
I'll make the video more appealing and blood-pumping next time.
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
I was underwhelmed by the video, and feel more the need to critique your driving than the vid =/

havent played TMN since they brought in the stupid freezone shit...
was a mistake bringing it in, completly killed our local scene. and they keep changing it, my usual servers are gone.

Critique everything if you'd like to.
I'm always happy to receive some driving tips.

Yeah that freezone shit really sucks balls.
At least they kept ESWC as it was.
''The second industrial revolution has yet to be fully experienced by 17% of the world as nearly 1.3 billion people still lack access to electricity.''
good driver
good music
fkin good graphic so high quality
10/10
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