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Deadstop's Replay thread
Some of my best replays. .
Please rate and criticize if necessary.
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Deadstop- One hit, One kill.rpl (109.2 KB, 13 views)
epic skeet shot.rpl (104.6 KB, 13 views)
Deadstop- Stopped Dead.rpl (80.1 KB, 7 views)
stylish decap3.rpl (69.1 KB, 6 views)
slap decap.rpl (74.1 KB, 4 views)
flip decap1.rpl (57.5 KB, 5 views)
extreme madman.rpl (115.8 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by deadstop; Apr 6, 2011 at 04:32 AM.
one hit: It was very stiff you moved funky and the decap sorta failed. You should try to relax and not contract extend everything, but relax to

Skeet shot: very impressive but it took to long to do it, try to do it in a faster time

Stopped dead: it was good intil the last hit when you flopped around. But you still could have done a tad better on the opener and the follow up

Stylish decap: funky and stiff, I don't think you should have flown away after that decap looked bad imo

Flip decap: the run was horrible you contracted and extend your leg almost everything you wanted to take a step you hopped half the way there, than the decap and the jump were extremely stiff, you need to learn the art of relax instead of hold all extend contract.

slap decap: It was nice, but a very often used opener, You should never jump uncontrolably like you did, you just flew away its bad to do and a bad habbit to get into it, you should have control over what you want to do before you do it


Overall: I would rate them 4/10 some were better than others but your biggest problem is relaxing
True most of them were old ones, except the skeet shot

oh and the flip decap, it was the wrong one i picked, put the new one
Last edited by deadstop; Apr 6, 2011 at 04:09 AM.
Alright, that one wasn't bad at all. you still need to learn alittle bit of relax adaptation to your moves, and aim a little more. and just tips, don't grab so much and make pointless kicks i.e last kick to torso part ;o
Try to do less frames with more damage, and that skeet was really unnecessary. Try to grab less, and if you do grab. Try to boom some area. And it looked alot better from stiff wise
Hmm. . . What Tf should i use? it always puzzles me.



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Edit: i just made a 300 frame short little 3dm thingy.
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Last edited by deadstop; Apr 8, 2011 at 09:40 PM.