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It's still a wip, but it is based off of Jaker's B-Twist. Please rate it and tell me how to improve. Especially on the dip.

And yes, it says B-kick. My bad:
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<Jaker> fucking yes , the black anal fetish fetus , :-* love ya .. btw i love how your teehts are touching my *PIEP* when you do a blowjob <3
I LOVE YOU :-*
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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I donīt like that u jumped at the frame 1364 till 1334.

But ur getting better and better..


Edit: I edited ur replay and made a turn without jumping. I think u can easily do it too.

btw. I freaking LOVE ur set
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Last edited by Chreeys; Apr 12, 2011 at 03:59 PM.
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hello festus cool that someone try to make the same move ;)
i like the way how you spin in the opener and the twist in the fly
but try to relax more, use shift+spacebar and im sure that you can do it better keep on working
Cheerys: Thanks for the comment and the edit, I can't B-twist from that step, but it looks very nice.

Jaker: Wow, I'm a fan of your work, thank you for helping me do your move.
<Jaker> fucking yes , the black anal fetish fetus , :-* love ya .. btw i love how your teehts are touching my *PIEP* when you do a blowjob <3
I LOVE YOU :-*
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Hey Festus,
I Liked that ButterFly Twist there.
It was quite smooth but the opener/360 spin wasnt the 360 that was needed.
You Could Learn alot from Chreeys Edit.
But you B-Twist itself nicely and the landing was smooth.