Toribash
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[Art] Fire
was aiming to draw a tori but got 2lazy anyway what you think the art aint much but its still funny.

I liked the text "DO NOT SET YOURSELF ON FIRE",but you should put all the text in the same color in my opinion.I didn't like the fire and white human,it was too far apart from each other,at least make the flame and human stick together.The others were fine,anyways 7/10.
Looks cool.
Make it good by getting all your shapes right, I see a lot of imperfect lines.
If you want to do a minimalistic style like this, it's very important to get your linework perfect!

Concept is cool, needs to be finished is all.

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Gradient fill on flames is just lame.
It's also pixelated, badly.
Idea is nice indeed, but work is quite bad.
You should make it cleaner, and smoother. The main problem is the fact that it's so pixelated.
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As everybody said:
Pixelated or badly-drawn lines.
Really lame gradient (it is better to colour it by yourself).
Idea isn't original at all (check this, that guy wears that avvy about half-a-year).
Originally Posted by Maccross View Post
As everybody said:
Pixelated or badly-drawn lines.
Really lame gradient (it is better to colour it by yourself).
Idea isn't original at all (check this, that guy wears that avvy about half-a-year).

In fact, it's the exact same stickfigure.
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