what do you think about this?
C&C please ^^

To be honest I think you need to improve the front mapping. The eyes are too high, the mouth should be a bit lower and the mask should also be a bit lower. Also, rotate the eyes a few degrees inward to have a better look.

The back looks a bit simple, but the picture doesn't show it well enough ^^

yep... you are right... let me see what i can do ^^
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wip2:

I think you should make the bottom of the mask more smooth and and do something with all them lines on the sides, it looks like you just went crazy, ot at least recolour it. Otherwise, good job, maybe I would make the detail on the ears a little darker.

It's still too high. The eyes should be right in the middle of the head, not above that line.

aren't them too low? Oo

i think head looking good all deails are good but you could work a littel bit on cemo
i give you 8/10

wip3:






and thanks for the comments ^^

great head hair looks real messy
the eyes still look strange over all 7/10

uff... eyes are my biggest problem T_T

i'll fix them later =D