i;m new with toribash,but i'm not new with art,and toribash,etc

here's my first avvy in toribash:


i know ther's lil bit mess on the background,but i've saved it into png,so i can't edit it

ps:i'm sorry i've bad grammar

CnC very appreciated

Nice. Yes, but I know you can do Much Better.
7/10 =D

looks like you used a bunch of random brushes and just smudged the green and red. Not very creative, and it's messy.

I don't really like it :/

i'm just saying thats not pretty like GFX,random brush
you just add brush and change the background dont you? i dont like it very much

owah no i don't use brush for it,i just use smudge and lasso and for the font "captus" i made by my own except the tori word

Way too much smudging and its not very attractive =/
Also, you could have made the words with more detail and shading. Or you could have just used a better font. Overall its very simple and easy to make. 4/10