initial impression looks good
nose area looks sunken in. thats the major thing that i notice. its pretty important that you get that fixxed up
smaller details that will make it pop:
face is set too low.
thecircles on the sides are supposed to cover your ears, the tops should be in line with where the eyes are.
the strap going from the mask should then wrap above those circles.
the mask looks pretty decent, but the back is pretty flat lacks the same attention to detail that darkjaks version has.
id have liked to see the top mapping nice and straight over the back, spending a little more time on mapping would have made this head just that much better.
a solid attempt nontheless