veeery dark dont you think?
not much of a fan of the design.
your use of
sharp angles,
straight lines and
round edges, and
thick areas and
thin areas doesnt really work for me
its like people saying talking about flow in sigs.
the area below the yellow/above the blue works pretty well, but the rest just isnt kicking it.
lines need to compliment each other, match curves, perpendicular lines etc etc