Hey guys this was my first video ever, so i would like some advices in how to make it better.
i Used only sony vegas pro 10
So any pother programs you think would help, im listening


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-usimm

Intro is the best part of the video.
It gets worse and worse as you watch it.
No sync at all.
Damn, this song is OVERUSED. It was used in at least 3 videos already.
Won't talk about shaders, because it is more like a technical problem.
Replays are bad.
I really don't like that fraps.com logo.
NO FREECAM? ARE YOU SERIOUS?!

I used freecam, and i you know how to read i asked for comments that would actually help, not saying what i did bad.
Your comment did not helped at all you did not suggested what i could done to get it better.
and its normal its bad its my first video.

go easy on him he just started

Things you need to improve :
-Freecam
-Shaders (If you can)
-Get the fraps logo away
-Try to speed the clip more up
-Sync the song to the video
-Use transitions
-Make use of effects (You dont have to but It looks pretty cool tho )

and maybe try using songs that havent been used that often since I used it somehow everybody started using it xD

the problem is that i dont know how to speed up things on Sony vegas pro 10,effects im new whit the program so dont really know them, and i have no idea how get the fraps logo away.
So any one that knows how to help me any, help would be nice.

www.FPAPS.com !!!
Also, mouse fail.
And too slow =/
And no sync, etc...
Eh... 1/10

THIS SONG. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.
http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...30&postcount=3


Horrible video. The replays were bad, recording was choppy and ugly, and I don't EVEN need to say about the music. No camera movement. The video was way too slow to even be close to fitting the music.

0/10.

again In what way your post helped me, i know what i did bad,you saying it again dosent help at all.
So if posted what i could do better and how to do it batter it would help ALOT.

ok for a first vid its not bad.
tips: well first im not sure which version of fraps are u using
but if ur not planning to buy it u can probably dl a newer version on a (torrent)
or something but im sure ull find a way.
now for shaders it all depends on the graphics card so im not shore i can help u there.
i liked the intro verry well done.
if u want a clip to be faster or slower u can find a tutorial on how to do that in sony vegas,
ohh and one more thing many people dont know but by pressing "K" u can generate a keyframe
and what that means that every keyframe in the right time period is where the camera is supposed to be so the camera movement is smooth and not just standing in one spot.
if u have any other questions ill be happy to help, just PM me.

ill say this, the intro was pretty fucking cool. you just need to work on these:
Replays, (try it out with the replays that toribash came with installed in it)
Shaders (but thats a computer problem, I feel your pain because I use to not be able to have shaders too...
You really should use Bezcam, or the keyframe system implemented in the game already for replay recording. And try to find a different kind of recording software, fraps puts that gay logo on top and it annoys everyone lol.
Sync: Watch a lot of videos that are made by veteran video makers, and you will relize how much sync can make a video epic.
Effects: just add effects, and be clever with your transitions.
Hope this helped.