Well, taking in consideration that you don't have a lot of experience in toribash, and it's your first vid i guess, it is a decent vid because i enjoy watching a relaxing vid more than a hardcore fast one.
The intro was a bit weird and slow but nice idea. Replays were ok for a begginer, try to use less grab and relax your joints more, it will look more natural. And there is a lack of effects in transitions.
Overall 6.5/10