Here it is, spinning with the sketch and all.

The Sketch was bought from hhu80; He agreed to let me finish and resell it.




EDIT:

I've finished it, Heres the head with the sketch in it, and without.

With:





without:

It needs reflections on the metal.
Visor is too high.
I like the colors though 7/10

i like the head but the visor is kinda small, it needs more details but its looking good

The visor, compared to the rest, have too much details. Either make the visor crappy, or spend just as much time with the rest as you did with the visor.

Just because it's not the front, doesn't mean that it's not important.

How else would gay men enjoy themselves if there was nothing ... well you get me, go get back to work now! I wish to see more details and more dedication to the texture!

The highlights are too strong and so is the shading. you need to go for the type of shading and highlights that will make the surface look metallic and glossy.