This is going to be my permanent single player replay thread. I am practicing a few times a day and making more regularly, please give me some tips or what I should improve on, I like getting rates for my replays as well. Here we go with my most recent one made.

You ghosted through your leg in the opener, which wasn't so good. The first hit could have been a boom with a better aim, and the next one was too messy for my taste. You grabbed too much here, the last hit was also messy and could have been a boom.

Grab less and pay attention to style more.

Basically what zalmoxis said, I give it a 8/10. But you should have added a skeeeeet.
Can I upload the skeet replay that was an edit from yours?

I think the opener was fine but the punch looked very awkward and it seemed like you were trying to get a dm but just could pull one through. the initial kick has potential to be one badass boom but I guess you just couldn't get enough momentum to get it to ghost. the second kick I love but it is pretty messy and could use some polishing. I also noticed the time between the 2nd kick and the last boom is wasted and looks pretty sloppy. Also if your grabbing the uke with the same hand the entire replay it tends to look repetitive and annoying so try to do that less.

So just clean it up a bit, use your time better, and grab less, and you should be just fine.

4/10

4dm boom go!

At first when I looked at this replay, I hated the fact that you reversed your joints so early in the replay,
but then I saw the rest of it, and I liked what you did with it. The decap was nice, but I almost thought
you could've had gotten the arms off with that punch as well. The 4dm boom was alright, but personally
you should've contracted that knee much sooner and went for a knee smash, or even a kick for that matter
where you could've gotten the same amount of dms (or more) without breaking off your knee. Other than
those things, nice replay. Keep it up.

Thanks for the advice, I really couldn't be bothered to edit the knee/kick at the time cause I was tired, so I just left it at that. I will try make some destructive replays now.


E: New replay.

Ehhh, The opener looked pretty cool and creative but the jump through the air at uke was awkward and kinda slow. The boom kick was nice but a little messy around your neck area. The final kick was relaxed and smooth but nothing above average.

4/10

I got 2 booms in this one.

Enjoy.

First hits were ok, second hit didn't flow as well as the first imo.

Last hit was awful, you should of done some spins and then followed up with a kick or a punch without grab to be honest.

Not going to go into much detail, but you're getting better I can tell that.


Continue as you are though, your replays should improve eventually.