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[Gfx]My tori
so here's my first attempt at this i would like some critics tips along with rating ?/10
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You're going to need to blend in the tori better before I even comment properly on this.
Try either:
  • 1px stroke [blending option] set to the inside at 0% opacity
  • Vector mask with blurred edges
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Originally Posted by Monobi View Post
You're going to need to blend in the tori better before I even comment properly on this.
Try either:
  • 1px stroke [blending option] set to the inside at 0% opacity
  • Vector mask with blurred edges

i said its my first attempt and i use gimp
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I don't care if its your first or last; its your first step it making it into art.
If you don't know how to do it on GIMP go here.
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It blends too much, and it is too monochrome. And look o:, the Tori owns a white outline and also look o:! Where are the rest of the joint at the hip part.
Try colorizing the background etc.
7/10 since this is your first attempt.
Last edited by jokerstein; Aug 2, 2011 at 02:48 PM.
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Originally Posted by jokerstein View Post
It blends too much, and it is too monochrome. And look o:, the Tori owns a white outline and also look o:! Where are the rest of the joint at the hip part.
Try colorizing the background etc.
7/10 since this is your first attempt.

Yeah This is my first attempt so i will try to be better next time thx
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It is very simple.

Try making it more complicated(the design I mean),like add more glowy stuff or some shadows,plus the tori is kind of small,or just resize the background to make it match with
the Tori size,and that white outline,what's the deadl 'bout it?

6/10
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