Please oppinions
1/10

-There wasn't any freecam
-The "game" tab was in a few of the clips
-The trails were glitchy
-Transitions were just cuts
-Ending was.... dont know how to explain it, you didn't even let the replay finish O_o

To be honest it just looks like you just recorded these replays and slapped on some music on it...
2/10

this is your second vid right?
well anyway im not
gonna say its bad or good
im just gonna give ya tips
until your video looks more
advanced than it is now.
-to remove |GAME| button just press Esc. 2x
-to remove trails type /opt trails 0 when they are glichy
-to use freecam press "k" while ingame to save one keyframe
and than continue a replay to some other frame
and again save a keyframe (if u already know than sorry if i bore u with it but some peaople
did not get the oppertunity to descover this)
-i noticed that it happens sometimes when u zoom in with
sony vegas that the black spots get shown so
what u do is just right click a clip in sony vegas and find switches\maintain aspect ratio and turn
it off
-to hide the mouse cursor there is an option on fraps but it probably depends on the version your using.
if u need some more help dont refrain from sending me a PM.

I like the music, I hate the freecam if there even was any, The replays are decent.

5/10

I like the music you piked but there are bad thing i wanna point out
- no freecam ,
-the replays arent that good
-no sync
-you should cut out the part from the beggining , the part when your tori is still standing still
-the game button is still there
i understand that youre still a begginer at this but i hope you become better soon
3/10