Your movements and attacks are not realistic, and too stiff. The choreography was boring, you need to be more creative. And work your moves to perfection, use the edit button, eliminate flaws. You have potential and talent, just practice and you will soar in this field of replay making. Try not to get so much distance between your fighters, as you will have a hard time getting them close together, and it will slow down the pace of the fight. Keep working!