i think it aint even that bad, the whole thing was just way to slow imo... the comic effect was kind of cool.
but next time aquire a licensce for fraps, or zoom at least a little bit in, to hide this fraps sign thingy
It doesn't play smoothly. Also, 10% of this video is watching a completely white screen.
Since everything is made up of outlines, it's hard to determine when one object ends and another starts. You could have tried making it an overlay, instead of just the outlines.
I dont know new style but the style isnt worth to make a whole video about it.
Also i didnt like the sync there like i know you tried but there wasnt great sync...
Also music should be a little slower for this movements.
But i enjoyed the replays they were good and i like it that its recorded with keyframes.
But in future cut out that (fraps) thing.