I posted a while back about a pilot story that was going to precede a huge story by me.

Well the time has come.

I have finished part 2, of many, many, many parts to come. I expect I'll stop at 30 or so, if absolutely no-one shows any interest in it.


Links:

Part 2: http://jokkun.deviantart.com/art/Ter...art-2-83892309
Part 1: http://jokkun.deviantart.com/art/Ter...art-1-83518045

Art 1: http://jokkun.deviantart.com/art/Ter...Art-1-83518407



Currently under development:

Part 3, which will introduce some backstory to the other character I showed, and advance the story a little.
Cover Art, which will basically be a scene that will describe the events in parts 1 through 3.



Like I said on my dA, I'm really unsure of my own skill, and still think I'm nowhere near good enough for a good read, so any criticism or comments are welcome and encouraged. Either here or on dA, I don't mind either way.

Discuss.