Yea giving Doxxy's "malus" style a shot.

this is what I came up with:

sketch:


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CnC pls!

I know it's only a sketch but I want mapping CnC, I suck at it atm, so pls gvie me feedback!

Very nice sketch maybe use colors like Purple,Red and Black and to be honest it looks a bit like black Spiderman but its only a sketch so the colors shall make it look different.

Looking good, but the first thing i noticed is the brow. You should make it thicker and more human shaped so it overlaps the eyes just a bit. Right now he kind of looks surprised.

I'm sure you will fix the teeth up later, but the mouth is a bit low, should raise the whole face up just a bit. And make the eyes a bit wider, so you can create more depth when you start to shade.

Good job so far, can't wait to see more!

Doxxy, you posted twice!

Also looks good so far.

I will comment more when it is colored cause doxxy already covered it.

I suggest making a more cynical looking grin. As Dox said, thicker brow and more, smaller teeth. Mappings fine, maybe bring the mouth up a tad and It would be fine. Nice so far.

okay, thanks for all the comments :> i'll raise it a bit and improve the mouth

I think the nose is a bit to long, the others got the things that should be improved, other then that it's nice

/off topic how's it going with my head?

nose is good. ( not the two dots at the bottom )

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Same... lol no ideas + no motivation :/

Maybe it will look better when there have been some shading added

/off topic (again) you don't need to do exactly that style, just something metallic

/offtopic: kay

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Pls CnC, as I said I NEED FEEDBACK!