Guys i'm new at replaymaking. Please CnC to make me get better. Feel free to give tips and edit.

It needs more relax, it's nice but it's not fluid enough.

rate it please but thanks for the tip

I liked it. I'm pretty new at replays to but I think it could be better. Like in the beggining I was expecting a boom hit. But you landed next to him, and it kind of turned into a madman. Now if a madman is what you were going for then that was a great replay. 8/10. But if you were going for a boom I edited your replay n the beggining so you can see what I am talking about.
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Ok thanks for the CnC here's a new replay.

Hey there guy. Let's see here...

I was gunna give Cnc on both replays individually, but I found out something that happens in both replays.

You know how to move, so that's good I guess. There are 2 things you need to learn.

First of all, all I see in those replays are crappy unplanned hits, and those don't look too good. Try relaxing some joints as well as holding some. Stay balanced, always be on your feet, or at least don't be upside down. And remember to plan where you want to hit him. Chill out for a little and think of a cool idea for a replay and the sequence you want to DM him in.

Second of all, you need to learn how to do boomhits. Trust me, they're gunna be hard as hell to get if you're new. I can still barely get them. All I can say is relax the legs or arms more, when doing boomhit kicks, relax the ankle, and finally:

EDIT
EDIT
Then EDIT some more!

A good replay can't be done in just 5 minutes. It takes time.
Hopefully, you read this. I think it'll help you a little. Overall, it's a 7/10. Keep trying man, I'm sure you'll be good.

thanks dude that helped alot because normally i do random moves and try to dm randomly, i look at the situation but is there a key to doing boomhits? is there a certain spot to hit for boomkicks?

This should help you get boomhits.

Also, when I read it I was too lazy to actually understand it, but now that I did I know how to boomhit better.

thanks for all your helps ;)
Here is my boomkick try pleas CnC.
Special thanks to pusga for introducing me to that thread for boomhits, it was really helpful.

Very nice replays!