Toribash
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[Art] Personal Logo
Made using: Adobe Photoshop CS2




P.S BenDover Thank you for giving me time to fix the thread instead of closing it >.>
ben edit: no problem, thanks for ignoring the rules.
Last edited by BenDover; Mar 26, 2012 at 02:58 PM.
not bad

the size and difference between the S and h conflict a bit.
and obviously the line around the border of the h needs to be fixxed.

would like to see the S having an interaction with the black part, similarly to the h, they look very separate and disjointed

the rounded edges could still be extended a little bit, the meet the straight line with a point, rather than flowing into it. looks like a circle with a small bit chopped off at the bottom.

overall, its alittle rough, spend a bit more time on polishing it up. if you repen it out, you could do it in 3 layers and get the final result to be alot more consistent
but the basic idea is ok
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
not impressive-- minimal and balanced-
look a bit like a oil station mark for a map-

beside me being ironic about it Not bad anyway

fix those lines ben pinted out and perhaps instead to make it white make like the letters are empty inside
Originally Posted by chicken89 View Post
not impressive-- minimal and balanced-
look a bit like a oil station mark for a map-

beside me being ironic about it Not bad anyway

fix those lines ben pinted out and perhaps instead to make it white make like the letters are empty inside

I will vector it in couple days, so all flaws will be fixed, also i will look what i can do about S;