this is a hallway i decided to make

inception gave me the idea but a long dark bare hallway is what i had in mind

critiques are appreciated
do not be afraid to hurt my feelings cause u wont
your responses help the overall growth of my becoming of a 3-d artist

thanks


all 3-d render(s) were created, modeled and rendered by Beven "turb0n3rz" wade
with the use of the following software:

blender 2.62

gimp

sketchbook pro

originally posted at the following url
"http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/094/5/1/a_hallway______duhhhhhh_____by_turb0n3rz-d4v22uc.png"


"i dont know how to use the spoiler button, so srry for the biggass picture"

nice render, but your door dimensions are off.
interior doors are typically 0.9 x 2.1m
youve drawn them at what? 1.1 x 2.1m? cant figure out the heights cus theres no context, so i guess the height doesnt matter, just the proportions.
anyway, doors look a little wide and unnatural.

also, there are no door frames, unless youve conveniently built and painted them into the wall?

the little squares you drew on there actually have structural significance, with set dimensions, the bottom bar should be the thickest with the other ones being smaller, which you have backwards, the bottom bar is the smallest and the centre one is the thickest.
and are usually only applicable to exterior or double doors.

doors should be reccessed into the walls a little bit more, the added shadows created would make it a little more dramatic aswell.

and skirtings along the floor and ceiling? not really necesary, seeing as its 3D and build quality is irrelevant, makes it a little more real though

very nice critique

i dont know much about doors, but that's no excuse
i will do more research on the architectural aspects of my work next time
thanks again for the honest critique

dont need to know about doors to know what a door looks like.
google images, or even look at your own doors.
use references untill you know enough about your subjects

stretch the immage vertically.... easy way easy go

doorhandles will stretch. doesnt account for the crossbar misproportions or the doorframes, door insets or skirtings.

if i decided to revive this image, i will re-do the dimensions for the doors and add door frames

a lot of people keep saying that the door on the end looks weird
i dont why it would, its the same exact door as the rest of them

maybe the camera is just in an odd place

i originally had some brass materials to the door handles but for some reason these two handles would spawn black squares, as if it wasnt done rendering,post render

so i reloaded the file and just appended a polished steel and was done with it

i also had some awesome lights, because as u notice on the celling the lights are too bright to show that there are any bulbs

When I first looked at the picture, I thought you just took a picture.
It is very realistic, and I like it a lot.

Lighting and doors worked and blended in with the picture really nicely

10/10

oval door handles its high design!