The opener was so generic, could be improved (and usually running openers are for round-offs, aerials etc etc).
The first trick is amazing, REALLY amazing, though the last kick looked a bit forced and a bit late.
Your feet were not steady in the whole replay; instead of using the whole foot, you only used your heels through the whole replay. Think about it.
The jump in the second trick is awesome.
At around the 136 frame, you started extending your right hip too much, looked retarded.
Over all, it was impressive with some minor flaws that can be ignored. This is your best in my opinion.