Toribash
Very nice!

I do believe his left leg is a little messed up. It doesn't seem to fit our prospective very well, although that is hard to judge until you add the coins. Also his left elbow looks a little strange, it looks too round.

The shading on the helmet is great!

What will the background be like?

I am excited to see the outcome of this piece of art

8/10 so far.

EDIT: also realized, around the waist, he looks a little too thin.
Last edited by Chaco; May 14, 2012 at 10:41 AM.
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Most def do more general art like this.
Loving it so far, though there are a few things you could fix before you advance to the clean up stage.

the first thing i noticed is his forearms, or at least his right forearm looks way too short. It's like half the length it should be. If you're going for a forced prospective type thing then you need to fix his hand and make it bigger.
Another thing is something is off about the head. It's me just being nit picky, but i dunno what it is. Could be the helmet is a tad too small, but it's nothing major.

Everything else looks good so far, i want to see more updates \o/
Last edited by Doxxy; May 14, 2012 at 10:40 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Aka jusmi.
Originally Posted by Doxxy View Post
the first thing i noticed is his forearms, or at least his right forearm looks way too short. It's like half the length it should be. /

My mom just said that lol

but yeah i will try to do all those things
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Sweet mother of jizzus and god, it would be one of the greatest things I've ever seen if it wasn't airbrushed that much.

8/10
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RAKU
Well this looks nice.

Very realistic with a cartoony touch, sad thing is that you've used airbrush a lot.
Needs more smoothening too.
Maybe add a sword in his left hand?

so far , it's fantastic.
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