A sketch I made for Chaco's request. CnC what to add/change/w.e. lol thanks

update *
Still a lot to do:
fix eyes (they're gross I know)
add a mouth and a nose
not really sure what to do with the dragon atm...

well,
the sketch is pretty messed up,
but I can see what you are meant to do.

it is a nice mapping of the eyes,
and is acceptable for far apart.
the eyes are a way wide, try to make it with less width.

if it is just a guy with helmet,
put many effort as possible on the face and helmet.
can be a pretty simple head, with complex details

Wow joshy, nice sketch you've got here.
I would suggest maybe adding a few scratches to his face.
Try messing with one of the eyes, like he was injured in a battle.

I think this head has a lot of potential, and I would like to see it completed.
Looks a bit too symmetrical at the moment, but I'm sure you'll find ways to make it have the perfect balance of asymmetrical and symmetrical appearance.

8.5/10

Nice work.

One of your best sketches I have seen so far :o
And sketches are named like that for a reason. They simply have to be messy in most of the cases
Anyways, it looks awesome but I have a feeling like the eyes might be a bit separated on a sphere. Have you tried it on a tori yet?
Also, you should totally edit the hair so it doesn't look too mirrored, etc.
Other than that, great work! I'm looking forward to see the result :>

sketch is too detailed. you should simplify your sketches to just simple, clean strokes, don't shade, don't add detail, nothing. just the bigger outlines, you add details when you paint. it comes more naturally and works better.

Thanks joshy

I suggest you raise the eyes, they look a little low.

Hmm kay. How would you like for the colors to be?
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updated

it is too blurry,
put more contrast and more sharp edges,

on the final step,
put the most detail you can with a small brush

that skin shading is really good but its way way way blurry and near the top it looks to be over smudged.

Your also starting to remind me on spr and dengue adding chins and shiz but hey you did good, perfect with the mapping etc rather than too high

um,that helmet. I'm unsure if you ever learned how to make a realistic metal effect and if you even wanted to learn, I can show you but its shit on small objects.

The skull or dragon head, it has a substantial amount of detail but its too dark, its like trying to look at porn in the dark, not helpful when you can barely see it.