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[Image] MS paint, Any suggestions?
I'm going to spend quiet a bit of time on this one. What do you think about it so far?
The picture is getting better, yes, no? Thanks for the suggestions Shyft and Jok. The picture is still not even nearly done.
Now it's getting better, I'm still working on it.
I think it's time to color and shade, you agree?
Well, here it is colored.
The picture is getting better, yes, no? Thanks for the suggestions Shyft and Jok. The picture is still not even nearly done.
Now it's getting better, I'm still working on it.
I think it's time to color and shade, you agree?
Well, here it is colored.
Last edited by Scythe; Jun 8, 2008 at 02:58 AM.
heres a few tips:
-kids arm is too short. looks like its just a t-shirt sleeve
-kids knee on the back leg doesnt match up with the rest of the leg
-tall guys arms are way too long
-gun is very unrealistically shaped
-tall guys legs are too short
other than that its pretty good for a sketch. could use a lot of work, but good for a beginner.
-kids arm is too short. looks like its just a t-shirt sleeve
-kids knee on the back leg doesnt match up with the rest of the leg
-tall guys arms are way too long
-gun is very unrealistically shaped
-tall guys legs are too short
other than that its pretty good for a sketch. could use a lot of work, but good for a beginner.
"Creativity is merely making mistakes. Art, on the other hand, is knowing which ones to keep."
Erm, I suggest you use different colors for different characters in the sketch, this way it's a tad difficult to figure out what's going on.
Besides what Shyft said, I suggest you set yourself some proportions for drawings.
For me, semi-realistic stuff works. I generally use stuff like:
- body is 7.5 times the size of the head.
- arms read up to just below the hip if they're fully extended.
Stuff like that. Google 'realistic drawing proportions' if you need more.
Besides what Shyft said, I suggest you set yourself some proportions for drawings.
For me, semi-realistic stuff works. I generally use stuff like:
- body is 7.5 times the size of the head.
- arms read up to just below the hip if they're fully extended.
Stuff like that. Google 'realistic drawing proportions' if you need more.
ok, now its looking much better. few more tips:
-tall guys head is a bit too small
-gun still needs work
-arm holding kid is a bit too curved.
-hand holding kid and the other kids hand need some work
-kid being held has no hand
-shirt looks a bit stiff. try to make it look like its hanging off his body a bit more, especially on the sleeves.
its looking much better now. my guess is its a picture of a guy protecting his kids, right?
-tall guys head is a bit too small
-gun still needs work
-arm holding kid is a bit too curved.
-hand holding kid and the other kids hand need some work
-kid being held has no hand
-shirt looks a bit stiff. try to make it look like its hanging off his body a bit more, especially on the sleeves.
its looking much better now. my guess is its a picture of a guy protecting his kids, right?
"Creativity is merely making mistakes. Art, on the other hand, is knowing which ones to keep."
