I've started making replays, this is really my first serious attempt.
It turned out okay, in my opinion. Maybe a 3-4/10?
I need to know what I did wrong and what I could improve on.
I'll update this thread daily with new replays.
And as a side note if anyone wants to collaborate with me just send a PM my way.

Well, opener was bad,
Failed at most parts such as frame:
350, 205, 70
And some parts could have been better.
Edit until you get the best hit.
Also try to not be that random and twitchy.
Pose: fine

Okay thanks, i'll work on that stuff.

Hurr Durr
It was very bad but not bad to begin
In the begin you "hushed" up your hand and it was look very weirdo
and you do grab dm's . try to do less grabs .
And you are didnt take care about dynamics you are just stand in one place and hit uke to pieces with sloppy hits
You need to fix the dynamics , I mean you need to make a dynamic opener next time where you can get to uke in a good speed to get some boom hits.
You need to use less relax:what you done with your hands is weird. controll your hands .
and do some normal kicks but only if you have the right position or balance.
Not bad but you have to practice many