You motherfuqer. U IZ BAK!!! :3
Both replays were really good. I see you have worked on not grabbing as much. Anyways, Magica was mostly perfect, great torso boom, something you could have improved was the last kick, it looked kinda weird. Im fat, great replay, great momentum, you could have had bigger booms. Also, ripping apart the gluteus looked very devastating.
Both replays were really good. I see you have worked on not grabbing as much. Anyways, Magica was mostly perfect, great torso boom, something you could have improved was the last kick, it looked kinda weird. Im fat, great replay, great momentum, you could have had bigger booms. Also, ripping apart the gluteus looked very devastating.
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I'm fat: almost perfect split, but you suffered some damage somehow
the decap was alright, nothing impressive
the double leg was good, I didn't notice it the first time
the pecs kick was good, but the torso throw was a bit pointless
the last few dms were a bit twitchy, and I don't mind grab dms, but I'm sure some people do
also would you please stop doing perfect poses?
I do have to say though, you looked stiff in some parts
holding the knee and contracting the ankle on the same leg sometimes make it look even more stiff, so try to reduce that
very flowish replay though
8/10
Tamaka Magica: great spin, but your arms were completely still the whole time
the splitcap was pretty much flawless, and the torso kick also looked pretty sweet
the next kick did not look solid, try to dm it all at once, not push your foot into Uke until everything dismembers
perfect pose etc...
8.3/10
I'll cnc white shirt when I have time, it's 11:40 PM here
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White Shirt: Seen that opener before many times
the first kick was not bad at all, but the decap wasn't as good as it, I feel like you should start making decaps other than grabbing it with one hand and punching with the other
lowering your shoulder right after it didn't look very stylish either
you looked like you were preparing yourself next for a kick with the rigth leg, but you kicked with your left one. why did you instantly change direction, it completely destroyed your flow
the dismemberments on the kick were kinda good
the last kick was alright, but your upper body was completely hold all, or atleast it seemed like it
one thing you do while kicking is to become very stiff in your arms and torso, remember that those can be used for momentum, just read some tutorials if you need help with it
7.7/10
the decap was alright, nothing impressive
the double leg was good, I didn't notice it the first time
the pecs kick was good, but the torso throw was a bit pointless
the last few dms were a bit twitchy, and I don't mind grab dms, but I'm sure some people do
also would you please stop doing perfect poses?
I do have to say though, you looked stiff in some parts
holding the knee and contracting the ankle on the same leg sometimes make it look even more stiff, so try to reduce that
very flowish replay though
8/10
Tamaka Magica: great spin, but your arms were completely still the whole time
the splitcap was pretty much flawless, and the torso kick also looked pretty sweet
the next kick did not look solid, try to dm it all at once, not push your foot into Uke until everything dismembers
perfect pose etc...
8.3/10
I'll cnc white shirt when I have time, it's 11:40 PM here
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White Shirt: Seen that opener before many times
the first kick was not bad at all, but the decap wasn't as good as it, I feel like you should start making decaps other than grabbing it with one hand and punching with the other
lowering your shoulder right after it didn't look very stylish either
you looked like you were preparing yourself next for a kick with the rigth leg, but you kicked with your left one. why did you instantly change direction, it completely destroyed your flow
the dismemberments on the kick were kinda good
the last kick was alright, but your upper body was completely hold all, or atleast it seemed like it
one thing you do while kicking is to become very stiff in your arms and torso, remember that those can be used for momentum, just read some tutorials if you need help with it
7.7/10
Last edited by pusga; Jun 10, 2012 at 08:34 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
oh yeah
