Opener was a common one,
The distance was too close for that opener.
Split was messy and weird. It was also un-clean.
You were mostly stiff and you could have continued the replay.
Movement was really weird. And after the kick the useless movement were useless.
Over-laxed at frame 217, don't relax all and keep it that way for alot of time.
And the pose was unbalanced and a bit crappy.
Try to use better moves instead of pressing space for like 40 frames. And watch other peoples replays to understand how to have more style or move better.